Blog 13: revission

I saw all the smoke it was gray and dark and then it disappeared into the sky, I told the others to stop the ship. As I got onto the small boat I wondered about how the smoke got on the island. It looked deserted from where I was in the ocean. I could visualize the island, all of it burnt. As I stepped onto the beach I heard ululation of young boys. I then saw one of them run and peek through the forest. he looked drowned out and was bloody and had bruises all over his body. He lifted his head from where he fell, there were bugs on his back maybe as if he was cowering. About ten other boys poked out of the forest two in the back were heaving a spear stuck in the ground, what were they doing with a spear?
"Who is the leader here?"
As one small British shy boy started to come forward, he then stepped back as if he was scared of me, but then the boy at my feet answered.
"I am sir."
They then told me that there was two killed boys that were on the island. They all know better they were raised to be good boys. What was I to do take them back on my ship now knowing that they are savages. It was amazing to think why these little boys would do something like that, they didn't elaborate enough I needed to know about how it happened so I knew what to do. I looked out unto the ocean My ship sat there floating, I looked closely at the cannons and guns on the ship, maybe the boys weren't the only ones.

Blog 12: Trial of Jack (Piggys Auntie)

My name is Betty, My beloved nephew Piggy was stranded on an Island and then killed. I am fifty two years old and grew up and now live in Brittan. The boys should have known better than to act like crazy animals and kill people, especially my Piggy. I would think they would try to keep it together and behave. Roger should have also thought before what he did and now he has to live with it for the rest of his life, it was and outrage. Now my piggy is gone, I will never be able to see him.

Blog 11: SAVED

I saw all the smoke it disappeared into the gray sky, I told the others to stop the ship. As i got onto the small boat I wondered about how the smoke got on there the island looked deserted from where I was sitting in the ocean. I could visualize what it looked like on the island, burnt. As I stepped onto the beach I heard the ululation of young boys. I then saw one of them run and peek through the forest. he looked drowned out and was bloody and had bruises all over his body. He lifted his head from where he fell, there was bugs on his back maybe as if he was cowering. About ten other boys poked out of the forest two in the back were heaving a spear stuck in the ground, what were they doing with a spear?
"Who is the leader here?"
As one small British shy boy started to come forward, he then stepped back as if he was scared of me, but then the boy at my feet answered.
"I am sir."
They then told me that there was two killed boys that were on the island before. they all know better they were raised to be good boys. It was amazing to think why these little boys would do something like that, they didn't elaborate enough I needed to know about how it happened. I looked out unto the ocean My ship sat there floating, I looked closely at the cannons and guns on the ship, maybe the boys weren't the only ones.