We walked down the island wondering what was going to happen to us once we entered Jacks Mansion. We walked up to the Roger who was guarding the big rock acting as if he was a guard for a castle. When we approached him we all leaned back from him as if we were scared. As we started to talk Jack had come and returned from hunting, we were trapped between two evil people. Ralph and Jack got into a fist fight while we stayed back from the nonsense. but Piggy felt like he needed to get in the middle of the fight. "I got the conch" he yelled. But as Ralph and Jack lowered the fight, a huge boulder that roger dropped charged down the hill aiming straight towards Piggy, as we stare at Piggy we stand in the same spot the whole time in shock about what was going to happen instead of trying to help. Piggy fell off the platform and split when he hit the rocks, in our whole life we would never think to see someone being killed but on this island anything can happen. As Jack runs towards Ralph they both disappear into the forest, while we are tied up.
"you better join our tribe, you have no one else but yourselves, well maybe Ralph". they tried to convince us.
We waited tied up and we hoped to see the return of Ralph.
3 comments:
when I first seen ur title i was confused until i started reading and it revealed that the forty feet was the walk
Amber, let me just say now that I love how you add a picture along with your blogs. They always help me visualize what is going on and what the blog is going to be about. There isn't much to say. You did a fantastic job! I personally loved, "...in our whole life we would never think to see someone being killed but on this island anything can happen." This sentence didn't have much movement to it, but it was so true. I read this and completely agreed. On that island, anything was possible. I could also easily tell who's perspective you were taking from without looking at the description or title. I find that very difficult to do, but you did a great job of making it clear. Keep up the work!
Do not know what blog this is, but the titles are still messed up, but i found a handful of spelling mistakes that will take too long to list but still the story follows the prompt and is intriguing.
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